INTRODUCTION
THESIS STATEMENT: Mostly I get so surprised when I met new people. However new cities, new schools force us to get used to this. All people have really interesting characters, habits or obsessions. Sometimes I think ‘that must be the most interesting person that I can meet in my life’. Nevertheless, after a while I see that I am wrong. However when you look yourself from a different aspect you can easily realize that you are also an interesting person. For instance I can tell for myself; my sense of direction problem, being afraid of revolving doors, elevators, escalators and writing acrostics nearly about everything.
BODY PARAGRAPH 1
TOPIC SENTENCE: It can be really funny or incredible for most of you but my sense of direction is really very bad.
· I can lose my way so easily.
· I may even have difficulty in finding a place where I had been many times.
· I sometimes can not understand to which direction the building I am in looks.
· The problem can be much bigger for me especially when it gets dark.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2
TOPIC SENTENCE: For many years, I was afraid of revolving doors, escalators and elevators. Now I got used to elevators since I have to use them many times. When it comes to revolving doors, they still annoy me. And I am still afraid of elevators.
· Once I was stuck in an elevator and that made my existing phobia more unbearable.
· I force myself to be so careful while getting through a revolving door.
· Sometimes those which are made to make our lives easier can make it harder.
BODY PHARAGRAPH 3
TOPIC SENTENCE: I don’t know the exact reason (it has nothing with a special talent) but whenever I try to write something I find myself writing an acrostic.
· I write acrostics for my friends on their birthdays.
· Also when I am bored and someone annoys me, I do it.
· I must say that I am not good at writing acrostics, it is just for fun.
· Although I usually enjoy it, it prevents me from writing a poem.
CONCLUSION
The appearance is really not related to the characters or habits. You can come across a huge man who is afraid of a small mouse. You know as human beings we are complex creatures.
6 Mart 2009 Cuma
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You can write your essay but I think you should rewrite this sentence
YanıtlaSil"For instance I can tell for myself; my sense of direction problem, being afraid of revolving doors, elevators, escalators and writing acrostics nearly about everything."
like
"for instance, I can say that I am also interesting from these perspectives: ...."
Good luck with your task.